condom crusader, firecat, kit, and rubber lass (condom crusader (series) and etc) created by kitsune youkai
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Condom Crusader and The Primal Call - Page 03

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Page 3 of 20
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Main plot : kitsuneyoukai
Writing staff for dialog: kitsuneyoukai, CriticalPanda, Zephyrotica, and 1 anonymous boi
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Commentary:
I think i really suck with drawing tit fucking, i've done it very very rarely, almost as rare as blowjobs x.x so i hope didn't do it too awfully...

Where the heck is the mountain?! where did we park it...

ALSO... kind of important fact... but i'm very very likely doing to write this comic already XD fuck!... second half is going to be very different, but i feel i under utilized the situation they are in =l but i think its more romantic and has more characters/action, so that'll be good X3
what i already wrote will just be pushed back into next comic, which is good, since i wasnt 100% what'd happen anyway yet o3o;

reminder, if you are a er, and want your name added to the first and last post, AND to the physical print when it happens, let me know! :3
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Rubber Lass Figurine - Condom Crusader Figurine Or perhaps one of the 3 comic books?!
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Translation notes for what the cave people say:
P2: This is fantastic! Her mouth feels amazing as well. I can get used to this!
P3: Take my seed, you delicious vixen!
P4: That was great. Give me a bit of time to rest. You and the fox have your fun now...
P5: Ah... my goddess...

Actual translation assets:
https://file.fox.pet/d/8233b5c9bca04530a533/

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    s 8 and 9: Looks like Timewinder knew this would happen and had a plan to get Kitsu and Cat back home to their time.

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  • wolfknight5454 said:
    s 8 and 9: Looks like Timewinder knew this would happen and had a plan to get Kitsu and Cat back home to their time.

    To be fair all we know is it could have taken anywhere form a few hours to many years to find them.(in the main timeline not theirs). Either way the rest of the comic will let us know I assume.

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  • It would make sense if youre going to add dialog for the primitives, then ensconce the text with < > so we can understand what they're saying.

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  • Well, surprised no one else said nothing and likely won't get chewed out for it, but I added the translation for 3. Since it was somehow skipped over, I used the Al Bhed translator site that was linked in the previous comic.

    Though I'm surprised Kit or no one noticed as it was being worked on, there was an extra letter in the word for "delicious" in that sentence from the cave bear (with the second a in "tamaeleuic", it misspelled the word as "deleicious"). But guess it's not possible to edit that at this point (and re on some sources, like on this page)… much less in the compression file for translation.

    I love how this comic is progressing, though I am certain their teammates and Timewinder may have some choice words for them when they get back. With Kit having outed themselves as siblings, unless their teammates already knew that much.

    Updated

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