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    pokebreeder25 said:
    the dialog needs work.

    What are you talking about? Dialog was good. Opening statements were to the point and all the moaning sounded good. I'm glad it didn't fallow most porn with the characters describing what they are feeling or anything like that.

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  • cyandog182 said:
    What are you talking about? Dialog was good. Opening statements were to the point and all the moaning sounded good. I'm glad it didn't fallow most porn with the characters describing what they are feeling or anything like that.

    I see what they're saying, it's more that it's kinda monotone. The dialogue itself was good. Just not much emotion in it.

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  • cyandog182 said:
    What are you talking about? Dialog was good. Opening statements were to the point and all the moaning sounded good. I'm glad it didn't fallow most porn with the characters describing what they are feeling or anything like that.

    Okay so dialogue is indeed stiff at the intro. "I am free, what is it you would like to talk about?" was a pretty robotic response to someone who is essentially fuck buddies with you. The delivery of the line was pretty crap. Dialogue was NOT great in conclusion. I don't count moaning noises as dialogue as the word kind of implies there's conversation.

    Now to talk about the voice acting as a whole... The moaning noises were great from one and lackluster from the other. I could really only hear one voice essentially. This isn't so much a big deal I guess though, one could be a screamer and the other a whisperer.

    Overall the voice acting was great (probably being misnomered as dialogue by some) if you take into the moans and exclamations but again, the dialogue was stiff and robotic.

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  • malikfoxen said:
    Okay so dialogue is indeed stiff at the intro. "I am free, what is it you would like to talk about?" was a pretty robotic response to someone who is essentially fuck buddies with you. The delivery of the line was pretty crap. Dialogue was NOT great in conclusion. I don't count moaning noises as dialogue as the word kind of implies there's conversation.

    Now to talk about the voice acting as a whole... The moaning noises were great from one and lackluster from the other. I could really only hear one voice essentially. This isn't so much a big deal I guess though, one could be a screamer and the other a whisperer.

    Overall the voice acting was great (probably being misnomered as dialogue by some) if you take into the moans and exclamations but again, the dialogue was stiff and robotic.

    Indeed the majority of the work was better than the intro, but it theoretically could: (blah blah blah, critic etiquette boather)....anyway I do agree with both standpoints none the less. Good chat my fellow

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  • I've been lied to, not once in my life wearing glasses have I been able to smoothly pull anything over my head without them being flung.

    in all seriousness this animation was amazing

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  • pokebreeder25 said:
    the dialog needs work.

    It's because of lack of subtitles, huh? I still enjoyed it though, sure you have too.

    Updated

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  • I loved the focus on nipple play here. That stuff is too often overlooked (in my opinion, anyway).

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