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Chapter 5, Page 9
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    Follow your gut Pen! This guy feels like a gaslighting narcissist. Dont buy into the bullshit!

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  • Kick that man in the balls. He loses "balls not being kicked" privileges right now.

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  • Ped rolling a nat 20 insight and completely dodging the "he doesn't love me" subplot is great. Let them be gay together!

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  • Sucks that Pen still has a bit of the 'preds dangerous' thought process, but at least it's limited.

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  • Well, if the stranger is lying, then he serves no purpose in the story. Pen and the coyote will just keep getting to know each other better and live happily ever after. The end.

    Unless the guy is telling the truth, and Pen is going to find out the hard way.

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  • hasgha said:
    Well, if the stranger is lying, then he serves no purpose in the story. Pen and the coyote will just keep getting to know each other better and live happily ever after. The end.

    Unless the guy is telling the truth, and Pen is going to find out the hard way.

    You have literally no imagination lmao

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  • got so invested in this story that i binged it for the past two hours, and started checking everywhere for anything past this . ho-ly shit. this is one of, if not the BEST comic i have ever read in my time (thats coming from a manga reader, those arent really comics per-se, but still...)

    keep this up, im genuinely DYING for more of the story, also considering buying some of the stimckers too x3

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  • hasgha said:
    Well, if the stranger is lying, then he serves no purpose in the story. Pen and the coyote will just keep getting to know each other better and live happily ever after. The end.

    Unless the guy is telling the truth, and Pen is going to find out the hard way.

    Or he's lying for a reason, as even Pen has figured out, and won't stop just because he's not believed.

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    averagefurry305 said:
    Man someone kick this guys ass already 🥰

    Oh, when Pen tells Indy about this, I imagine Indy will have someone in mind about who he wants to tear into pieces.

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  • hasgha said:
    Well, if the stranger is lying, then he serves no purpose in the story. Pen and the coyote will just keep getting to know each other better and live happily ever after. The end.

    Unless the guy is telling the truth, and Pen is going to find out the hard way.

    I apologize, but that is a poor understanding of the situation.

    Try to ask, what is the individual's motive for lying about Indy? Will that motive cease to exist if Pen doesn't believe him and continues to see Indy?
    Will an individual who threatens to frame another (legally vulnerable individual of his own minority) person for assault stop at simply lying about their past?
    We already know Alan has been harassing Indy at work, there is no indication whatsoever that he will stop simply because Pen doesn't believe him.
    That isn't how abusive, obsessive scumbags function. They don't stop unless they're forced to stop.

    There is more to conflict and storytelling than the obvious and immediate.
    There's also more to storytelling than conflict, as was shown in the previous chapter, which was primarily getting to know the two main characters and was extremely enjoyable despite the low stakes.

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  • Glad our cute deer boy sussed him out.

    But what if he isn't lying and this is a complete, 200 IQ move by the author to gaslight us, and make us think he's lying so that we don't suspect Indy?

    Not that this is a prediction. Just food for thought.

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  • I can't help it. Everytime I read Alan's dialog and body language it makes my skin crawl. The author did a fantastic job making Alan give off red flags.

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